My raps for battles

I usually make satirical raps incases of threads I don't like very much. Like this one I just posted in a thread about rap battles:

You think you thread rocks,
Well its one Poozy will probably lock,
or maybe another mod
so you better start prayin to your god
Maybe you'll get banned
and your influence will get fanned,
you got a plus one post
for which you are the host

But I decided it wasn't finished, so I'm here to do just that:

You think you thread rocks,
Well its one Poozy will probably lock,
or maybe another mod
so you better start prayin to your god
I ain't no fraud son
Maybe you'll get banned
and your influence will get fanned,
And if that happens
You'll miss out on the rappins'
From the people of your nation
when you face your situation

you got a plus one post
for which you are the host
On this board your chalking
so you better get flocking

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Should I make a sequel to the above rap?

Heres the thread, if you wish to see my other raps bashing on his thread
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/12 59404

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Asandir 2011-07-12 14:20:23

Well, I tried to write a "diss", but since my english skills are not so good and I have no knowledge about rap, it is quite poor, but here we go ( it is not serious, and I like you) :

You think you have a good flow,
but your shit is clearly a no go,
You think that this will bring you praise,
but this is just shit pouring from your face.

You and me, we joined around the same time,
but it's pretty clear: this is my prime-time!
I remember the time where your stats were bigger,
but now I have beaten you, take that, ni**er!

While people love me and say I am fine
your state of popularity is in a decline,
I rise to the top, to the throne of all users,
while you have to watch, like all the losers.

/ On topic, you should definitely make a sequel, I am looking forward to it :)

Suprememessage 2011-07-12 14:20:23

Nice rap, thanks, and I recomend you check out that thread if you liked my rap.

Nentindo 2011-07-15 15:49:12

I'm gonna attempt to continue this rap you made, which by the way is awesome. Ok, here goes less than nothing...

While I'm rocking
Not to music, but in my chair,
While I'm sitting in my secret lair,
Eating a mouldy old pear.
Which to be fair,
tastes kinda crap,
but that has nothing to do with this rap,
but sitting in my lap,
is a laptop,
which while I'm on it, I'm the cream of the crop,
even if my top is covered in slop,
While I'm drinking Dr Pop.
Makes me glad I'm not a cop,
all those hours of work,
I just want to lurk,
on my favourite site, NEWGROUNDS!

I've always wanted to rap, but I don't have the vocal ability or the voice for it. Plus I run out of ideas while writing easily.

Make a sequel to your rap! I want to hear more of it!

Oh yeah, thanks for putting my site in your site box!